22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

1.  https://youtu.be/xmiP3WxVl_A

2. I did not receive any feedback about things to change about my most recent pitch, so instead I critiqued myself and noticed I could do a better job of speaking more fluently and being more compelling.

3. In this pitch, I rehearsed several times before recording and I was sure to sound enthusiastic about my idea and mention more details, such as the fact that a new library would be great to add for prospective students that are touring.

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  1. Hey Nicole,
    I think you did a great job for your elevator pitch. I know not receiving feedback might be confusing but you did a great job with your self-critique and looking to better yourself. I think the attire definitely matches your professional pitch and the tone of the message you're trying to convey. Great post!

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  2. Hey Nicole,
    I think you did a great job for your elevator pitch. I know not receiving feedback might be confusing but you did a great job with your self-critique and looking to better yourself. I think the attire definitely matches your professional pitch and the tone of the message you're trying to convey. Great post!

    ReplyDelete

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