17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
1) The pitch. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oBE34-_OmY 2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. The feedback that stood out to me as important was that fact that everyone that commented enjoyed the scenario that I gave in the beginning to help the listener visualize the experience and to convey the importance of the problem. Overall, the introduction was the main point of all the responses I received, and the comments I had about seemed hopeful about the idea of a new library, which boosted my confidence. These reactions were useful since they helped me determine what I should keep in my next elevator pitch and what to capitalize on. My roommate also gave me more feedback outside of blogger and told me that I should be standing and dress more professionally. 2) What did you change, based on the feedback? Based on the feedback I received, I included the same introd...