Hi Nikki, you did a great job with your elevator pitch. The beginning, when I was picturing walking into the library and there was no space made me get emotional. It's sad that many university students face this problem. But, you did give me hope with your solution to this problem. A new library is a perfect idea. I agree that off campus locations are inconvenient. My elevator pitch also deals with convenience of students.
Hi Nikki, I really enjoyed your pitch! Not only were you able to capture my attention in the beginning, but you were also able to help me imagine the problem by visually explaining the library. It was good how you used the negative problem and then flipped the switched and turned the pitch into a positive, hopeful idea. I think that the university would benefit from a new library especially as the population and ranking increases. Please call Kent Fuchs about this idea, I’d gladly invest.
Hi Nikki, you did a great job with your elevator pitch. The beginning, when I was picturing walking into the library and there was no space made me get emotional. It's sad that many university students face this problem. But, you did give me hope with your solution to this problem. A new library is a perfect idea. I agree that off campus locations are inconvenient. My elevator pitch also deals with convenience of students.
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your pitch! Not only were you able to capture my attention in the beginning, but you were also able to help me imagine the problem by visually explaining the library. It was good how you used the negative problem and then flipped the switched and turned the pitch into a positive, hopeful idea. I think that the university would benefit from a new library especially as the population and ranking increases. Please call Kent Fuchs about this idea, I’d gladly invest.